Well considering the fact that I could tell from first glance that you didn’t write it, I’d say so. You need to make your letter personal to you. The legislators here unfortunately don’t give two shits about how unconstitutional the bill is or how it grants too much power to the government. Give them some of your personal pain points and how the bill will affect you specifically. The letter doesn’t need to be a long drawn out thing, just keep it brief.Is there a concern?